Triad of the Moon Presents:
A Sailor Moon Page
- Some really weird information
- They are not consistent in their usage of names between versions
- Orange on Blue?
- One writer will say one thing, while another contradicts that.
- Long Loading Times
Positives About The Page:
- They attempted to put together a page covering every character from the manga.
- A lot of problems could be fixed with a bit of proof reading.
Nominated by: Ecco
I could use the loading song for this page, but it isn't half as bad for loading
as a few other sites we have this month. So I'll save it for them. Trust me,
you'll see why...
The poor loading time is caused by several pics used to link each profile. This
could be easily fixed by dividing up the profile links into several separate
files. Divide the links up into categories, have a page for each of those
categories. Only have a link to each category on the index. From there, you
can get to the profiles. For example, all the senshi go into one category, all
the villains into another. This would not only help get rid of the long loading
time on the main page, but would get rid of all the hideous scrolling as well.
Next, fix the colour schemes of each page. Get rid of the orange text on a blue
background. It's very hard on the eyes. The same goes for
many of the sub pages. Stick to black for the text. Don't try to make it look
"better" by using different colours. Trust me, it will look better in black.
As for the info, well I know Jun is planning to write a short epic novel on the
many info mistakes, so I'll just stick to a few things I thought really stood
out. The mistakes can be summed up with three little words:
"No proof reading."
You have spelling errors, detail errors, plus using names from one version, then
switching to another. I understand they found most of their info by reading the
French manga. That's fine, but only if they use the French names all the time!
To make matters worse, on occasion one of the owners will notice a mistake made
by one of the others, but they don't fix it! They will only add in comment
pointing out the mistake. For example, on the Pharaoh 90 page, one person calls
Pharaoh 90 a she, but the second writer says they think Pharaoh 90 is a he. They
don't bother to fix the mistake. They only point it out. Don't point it out,
fix it. Don't contradict each other. Oh, by the way, I think it's better to
call Pharaoh 90 an "it".
That's only one example of how they contradict each other through out the site.
One writes one thing, then one of the others adds their ideas, and comments
on the ideas of the first writer. This wouldn't be a bad idea while they were
first developing the page. They could have used it check over each other's work.
However, once it is posted on the web they should should have decided what was
right, and what was wrong. Don't contradict, it only ends up to be confusing,
leaving the visitor wondering who is actually right.
Overall I feel this site has much more potential, but only if the owners spend
the time to fix up the layout problems and spend a lot of time proof
I don't know what Cere's talking about; the other sites weren't nearly as bad
on loading time as this one. This page is a lethal RAM sucker- it'll suck
the RAM out before you can say "uhhh...?" I DO have a novel too. It's not
my first in my reviews, but it might be my longest! First off, why the HECK
are there so many pictures on the front page!? There don't NEED to be! RAM
sucker! Put them on DIFFERENT pages in DIFFERENT sections. Nearly EVERY
SINGLE character to ever appear in the manga is listed on the front page, and
EVERY ONE has a picture- that's not mentioning the miscellaneous sections that
have pictures too!
Each page has a weird class of background colors and font, so you might get a
page with readable font, others with nasty looking font. Most pages have one
huge picture at the top and font beneath, some have a couple of huge pictures
The front page claims to take the stuff from the French manga- unfortunately
the page demonstrates that these people don't care about the French manga,
they use the French names, the Japanese names, and the dubbed names everywhere,
calling Michiru "Michiru" at one point then "Mylene" at another. They call
the senshi "scouts", they use "Negaforce", and what is with this? I didn't
know you COULD screw up even more than DIC/Japanese. The entire page also
mixes up the manga and anime (whatever versions they've been watching) together
The "Fake Romantic Items" page is messed up, pairing every single senshi with
another character from another anime, who cares if they're already with someone?
"Theories" or "The Page of Randomness" is stupid. "What if there were zodiac
scouts?" or "* The Cross Over Theory Have you read Ranma 1/2 by Rumiko Takahashi?
You remember Kasumi and Nabiki Tendo, the two elder Tendo girls who you never
see? Well, what if they were Sailor Senshi?" Um, so what if they were?
The "Transformations" page is seriously messed up too. First there's the "Sailor
Soldiers" in their "everyday appearance"; then comes "basic transformation. To
achieve this, Olivia here would say "Saturn Power, Make-Up!" (Though Olivia
was previously Ottavia on another page.) "and we get: [a manga Saturn pic] . In
this incarnation, the Sailors all have their basic powers, in Saturn's case,
Death Ribbon Revolution." "Third comes the "advanced" basic transformation.
There's no costume change, so I won't have a picture. This transformation is
effected by a version of the phrase "Mars Planet Power! Make-Up!"." Next is
the "super transformation." "This incarnation has more advanced attacks that
require props, such as Mercury Aqua Rhapsody." Then comes the "eternal"
transformations: "This incarnation seems to use the prior attacks, such as
World Shaking. The transformation is achieved by saying some variation of
"Uranus Princess Power! Make-Up!"" The last stage is "the Princess incarnation.
Everyone wears a fancy gown in her specific color: . They don't need to say
anything to effect this incarnation."
"What If - an Interview with Sevrine Meio" demonstrates again how they mess up
the names (not to mention being totally pointless). They used "Setsuna"
before, now it's "Sevrine". "Time in Sailor Moon" is again screwed up, claiming
"In the case of Sailor Moon, it seems to ascribe to the "Circle Theory", one
most commonly seen in Native American mythology. This theory states that time
runs in a circle or spiral, with everything reoccuring endlessly." "First off
is the whole reincarnation theory. The fact that the Senshi are living out the
live that they screwed up previously says a great deal, as well as giving new
meaning to the phrase "he who fails to learn history is damned to repeat it"."
What the heck? They didn't screw up, they were killed! Plus they don't LIVE
their past lives, they live their PRESENT lives. Then in bright yellow font
which kills your eyes: "In the end of the story ends up in an alternate reality.
When Sailor Moon fixes everything they end up in a diferent future all together.
It is like a book I read called ONE by Richard Bach, which had the whole premice
that at every situation the decision branches off into two different futures.
That is why Crystal Tokyo is ruled by Queen Serenity and King Endemion. It is
a different world than the one they started out in. Plus since Sailor Moon is
eternal I.E. imortal there is no need for age and time anyway, unless she
wants it. This is why Chibi-Usa can be 903 and still look like she is nine.
Confusing, but interesting..." Confusing? No wonder! I'd be confused too if
I had no idea what I was talking about! The "Mythology" page isn't so bad,
even though it makes a lot of twists and leaps to try to make allusions (like
the "triad" thing and the Hindu thing). Here, there's also "Manoru" for
"Darien" and "Mamoru".
The info pages are for the most part messed up. A couple are okay, just because
they don't say anything so don't have the chance to screw up. The following
are lines from different pages I thought demonstrated how much work this page
needs. There are a lot more bad lines and information, but well, this gives
you a pretty good idea of the general overall wrongness to the info.
Sailor Senshi Pages: Bunny's page has "Mamaru". The intro to
Bunny/Serena/whatever is alright, until it reaches "Well she didn't untill she
saw this cute guy named Tuxedo Mask who she thinks, and soon finds out, is
sworn to protect her." That's not right. The owners think AMY is the most
shortchanged of the senshi, trying to explain that opinion and doing so poorly.
Rei's page is screwed up, both info and personality description, plus it changes
from Rei to Raya -_-; Uranus's page says that "When She first comes in, in
Sailor Moon S, She maskarades as a man to spy on the school that Olivia goes to"
as if they're just "spying" on Olivia. The opinions, especially the last on the
page, demonstrate that these girls have no idea what they're talking about.
They claim weird relationships between the Inners and Outers: Minako and Haruka
both are alike because they're both blondes (but not in the manga), and Pluto
and Jupiter both have green, and Saturn and Mars are both the most powerful.
"Sailor Saturn is the ultimate force. Without her, there is no change." What
does that mean? There's been change in the world of SM WITHOUT Saturn. Yaten:
"I think that Yaten looks a bit like a cat. Luna certainly thinks so - he's one
of the two humans that she falls briefly in love with. Most people would actually
term Yaten "the obnoxious one". I can see how they'd get this impression, but I
think that he's more shy than obnoxious. Of course, I may be wrong. I don't really
know much about Yaten". I think that speaks for itself... Jupiter: "The strong,
practical, and extremely romantic sailor scout." I think that's rather
contradictory. "She was in a gang, she fought viciously, and (in the Japanese
manga) even smoked." That's wrong. "As a scout, Sailor Jupiter falls into the role
of "Queen's Own". This means that she is the personal protector of the Moon
Princess. This is easily seen in both the anime and the manga. She's almost always
with Bunny and usually is saving her." What? EVERYONE saves Usagi/Sailormoon!
And in the anime, Mars is the one who shines through the most! "The manga Lita,
however, is romantic. This means that she dreams of true love, knights in shining
armor, castles anddragons and the whole bit, but is not activly searching for
love." Which is why she's always fantasizing over being a bride and falling in
love...? ChibiChibi: "It is because of ChibiChibi that everything finally works
out in the end. What a talented little girl!" It's not all because of her! And
it has nothing to do with talent!
Non-Senshi: "I think that Fobos and Demos are fairly interesting characters,
especially since Mars is then the only sailor senchii who has her own sailor
protectresses. (well besides Moon and MiniMoon) They are the begining of the wild
influx of thousands of other sailor scouts" Contrary to popular belief, Phobos
and Deimos are NOT Sailor Senshi. "There's a great scene in volume 12 where he
[Pegasus] kisses Mini Bunny as a horse (sounds gross, I know) and turns himself
back into a human. Ah! I'm such a sap." "Pegasus in human form is Prince Helios
of the dream world." "Helios is also "Sailor Sun" much as Tuxedo Mask is "Sailor
Earth"." First, Helios isn't a prince, and secondly, why compare him to a senshi
when he's not? "A humourous point in the NA dub is that they call him Sammy but
his hat says Shingo. ^_~" Yeah, it's hilarious, like how this page calls Celia,
Setsuna, then Sevrine. Melvin: "Interesting to note is that he also appears in
Code Name Sailor V." No, he doesn't, that's someone else. Whoever Mamoru is:
"Tuxedo Mask doesn't quite know who he is until he gets killed a couple times.
He was the Prince of the Earth or, if you like, he was "Sailor Earth", but I
would not like to see him in the little sailor senshi uniform."
Villains: "Queen Matalia never laughs, she just looms." "Jadiete: In
their past life, before he was turned evil, Mars was engaged to him. I guess
she was still sore about how things panned out." "Xi and Fi", "The Animal
Maids", I like how "Pharoah 90"'s page calls him/it a girl, then the writer's
friend corrects her but doesn't change the page anyway. For some reason,
they like Zoicite, who they call "her", though saying in the originals he's
a male, and they hate anyone else who is evil, like Rubeus. Uh, I don't get
it. "In the manga it is implied that he and Amy were engaged, but I'm not
positive." Neflyte: "I came to the conclusion that he did not have to work up
to an evil laugh because he was stupid, but rather because he really wanted
to do a friendly chuckle." Kaolinite: "Personaly I think its Elivra's bad
influence that turns Tomoe demonic, because he's not such a bad guy. If you
leave out the whole Mistress nine thing, he's been a very good father to Olivia."
In Diamond's page, they go into about not trusting "chucklers" like Diamond.
Malachite: "In the anime Kunzite's appearence is enough to horrify anyone. He
wears the typical Negaverse uniform, except he seems to have lost the button to
his tunic so that it flops open reaveling his "manly chest". To add to the
horror he has doctored up his suit with a cheap cape, maybe for a more impressive
appearence." "The Malachite of the manga is a horse of a different color. He
is the leader of the four generals and has absolutly no interest in Zoistite.
However in the past he and Sailor Venus were terribly in love. Of course then
he was brainwashed and turned evil." Wiseman: "He is responsable for brainwashing
Chibi-Usa and Manoru. He also amplefys the evilness in Prince Diamond.He is as
dispicable as he should be." Mnemosyne and Lethe are mixed up.
Basically, this page needs LOTS of work. Fixing the set-ups isn't too hard, but
the info needs *tons* of modifications.